The mind can be a tangled place, overrun with thoughts and schemes
and memories and plans and and and.
But within this entanglement there are relationships, connections
and support. Something within your mental cacophony can trigger
a peaceful feeling, a pleasant awareness, a path back to the present moment;
just like grasses use shrubs to climb toward the sunlight
and the shrubs feed on the nutrients of the seasonal grasses.
m1nute 
This started off so well, and I was really enjoying it but I felt the last two lines sounded as if they didn’t quite fit with the style of the rest. The theme and most of the presentation is wonderful though.
Thanks for your thoughts, Carol. It’s always good to get feedback.
No problem, and thank you for the like on one of my posts. I was having a little think earlier, I wrote a piece called lost which is up on my site, it’s following a similar theme to ‘Within the tangle’, I would love to see your thoughts on it. If you have a spare moment of course.
Thanks Tim. A great message/metaphor that came at a good time for me.